tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12259265.post113223919771502856..comments2023-10-26T04:21:32.229-07:00Comments on Mirth, memories and more: The Wallmusafirhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15193219312921687895noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12259265.post-1132836420207471792005-11-24T04:47:00.000-08:002005-11-24T04:47:00.000-08:00Evolved writing. This was beautiful.Evolved writing. This was beautiful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13441809988487585009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12259265.post-1132419248182039652005-11-19T08:54:00.000-08:002005-11-19T08:54:00.000-08:00Do you realize fully what you have written !!Do you realize fully what you have written !!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13441809988487585009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12259265.post-1132306168793225772005-11-18T01:29:00.000-08:002005-11-18T01:29:00.000-08:00@ afj: It shows, doesn't it? Ah, never mind -- sti...@ afj: It shows, doesn't it? Ah, never mind -- still have a long way to go. <BR/><BR/>And I thought I went overboard at times with the description.musafirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15193219312921687895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12259265.post-1132306132969648992005-11-18T01:28:00.000-08:002005-11-18T01:28:00.000-08:00@ samudraa: Thanks! All in good time. I was consci...@ samudraa: Thanks! All in good time. <BR/><BR/>I was conscious of writing about a "woman's" emotions when I started but then I switched identities with her pretty quickly.musafirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15193219312921687895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12259265.post-1132305106269976002005-11-18T01:11:00.000-08:002005-11-18T01:11:00.000-08:00I can see that you have worked on this piece. A li...I can see that you have worked on this piece. A little more description would have made it perfect. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13441809988487585009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12259265.post-1132283415885652572005-11-17T19:10:00.000-08:002005-11-17T19:10:00.000-08:00Here u r!!!With the last one and this u've evolved...Here u r!!!<BR/><BR/>With the last one and this u've evolved ........as a writer,as a person.The fact that u can write the intense emotions a woman experiences this beautifully proves that u have come a long way.<BR/><BR/>Kudos,way to go!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13441809988487585009noreply@blogger.com